First, work with the director on streamlining and shaping
your script for the reading.
Preparing it for the reading will get it in better shape for readers at
film companies or agencies. This
creates a tighter script that’s closer to one that will get read and bought.
- Cut
unnecessary screen directions --
make sure they are specific, relevant and concise.
- Eliminate
overly talky dialogue, unnecessary exposition, etc. Once an actor embodies the role, much can be said with
behavior, a look or gesture. Is
the dialogue sharp enough?
- Does
every scene have a purpose? Does
it move the story forward? If you
delete it, will it be missed?
- Is
there enough dramatic tension overall?
Are there reversals and complications in the plot?
Second, prepare the director with character descriptions so
they can be cast in your script accurately. Explore your principle characters once again. What makes them who they are? Are their motivations clear? Does the dialogue match who they are,
and are their voices different?
Sit in on a first read-through with the cast. (Learn the ropes of a writer’s role
when a director and actors are present, which for better or worse is often to
keep quiet and write notes for the director to give to the actors. All directors are different but most
have rules not to allow the writer to give directorial feedback or notes.)
Answer the actors’ questions, via the director; involving:
character arc, time line, motivation/objective.
Sit in the audience and hear the actors breathe life into
your characters (and whether or not actors in the reading would be cast in the
film itself). Experience your
screenplay from the audience, feeling what works or what doesn’t, hearing when people
laugh, are moved or seem to become uninterested -- and if and when they’re on the edge of their seat wondering
what’s going to happen next.
Get objective, constructive feedback via a Q&A,
question-forms within the venue that reading date, or email.
“Workshopping” your script in this way is a potentially
invaluable step in creating the best screenplay possible. This can also be used as a presentation for
industry guests and/or investors, if writer and director feel it is polished
enough. A reception can be
provided.